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the lineart on this versions actually from sai OTL
it turned out better than the original sketch commie,and i wanted it to be better hi q seeing as my scanners still a butt =_= /kicks it
so yea i redid it on sai ;_; jhgejgd im sorry im a lamebuttock orz

xing xing xing ahhh shes so fun to draw *u*/

for ....shoot i need to find your devname *cant remember*

NVM FOUND YOU :iconanimefreak2345: ;A; AHAHAHA

brushes are c someone
oc is c original owner
only art is mine

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:iconanimefreak2345:
Alrighty, where to begin. First a disclaimer:
(Disclaimer: I'm not much of a drawing artist, so feel free to take anything I say here with a truckload of salt.)

Alrighty, first, let me get this out of the way first. You may have done it on SAI (AWESOME program, BTW), but I FREAKIN LOVE how it almost looks like a wood carving, ala ancient Chinese artwork. The style may not be, but the color and the the deep lines really pull it off well. I also like the way you wrote her name :D.

Now on the other hand, something I should have mentioned, that despite being a Chinese character, she's from a very poor part of Hong Kong in the 1980s, which wouldn't really have her wearing a qipao. No biggie though, a TON of other people drew her with one on too.

However, I like the thick lines, like I said before, along with the tan-ish background. I also like the thick hair you gave her o.o Almost all the other pictures of her have fairly boring straight hair. There's some minor stuff with her arms, but no biggie.

And once again, I have to say, I love how it looks almost like a wooden carving o.o. It really adds to the impact of the picture, and it's very impressive!

And thank you for drawing one of my characters! :)
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:iconfapel:
this is tight yo
i like the pose
omgg your sketches are so sexy bluu TAT

LOL YOU FORGOT THE NAME OF THE PERSON WHO COMMISSIONED YOU?
or something idk what maybe i read wrong asokfjasklf

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cuz its not shiny desu liek ur cat--er neko.
@m@
:iconbluubun:
no no no this aint tight
we tight like brudahs man

LOL SHUTUP THE NAMES LONG ;___;!!!!
:iconanimefreak2345:
WOW.

You should turn on critiques, lol.

And um...*cough*

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They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever
:iconanimefreak2345:
Weren't you going to call me Captain? :B

*cough*

I have no idea who this is for either :iconimhappyplz:

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They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever
:iconbluubun:
LOL ;A; EGIDGIDE

but im lazy to turn them on ;A;
unlessIshould..whichIprobablyshould
OTL

iknewyournameitstoolonglmfaooo
:iconanimefreak2345:
I was going to write one if you did, actually (:.

And...call me anything? lol

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They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever
:iconbluubun:
ok turned it on xD hit me away lmao

uh ok i'll call you big joe owo/!
:iconanimefreak2345:
YAY

TELL FAPEL. She doesn't know what to call me :B.

And critique to come!

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They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever
:iconfapel:
LOL WTF
This wasn't directed at you Captain sir LOLO

LOLic
or iz fer u D:

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cuz its not shiny desu liek ur cat--er neko.
@m@

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